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15 years ago  #331
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Originally posted by Whispario Joey Pulls back the hammer on his P89 n with a tear in his eye says"Sorry Cuz...I tried"... I tell him put it down cuz...today aint your day. he gives me his rifle n gets on his knees with his hads up... I take a few steps towars the Agent with the bullhorn with both rifles held high above my head and get on my knees ... If lil man wasnt there I wouldve went out in that blaze of glory they talk about... but then who'd look out for my cousin ? 

 

  

Aww..Good Job Whisper...But..that was very good...the ending was very sweet..in a way..lol....It made me smile...Lol...Awww..Joey...::eats a cookie::..

15 years ago  #332
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Originally posted by headhunter11b TXTBLK. don't even feel like reading all that stuff, sorry. I'll have to pass. 

=( awe man i really thought alot into that story too...hmm guess ill re think a new one and make it shorter

 

well, the part I did caught on somewhere in the middle was about..... eating that girls tit after you cut it off her chest......?? why would I start from the beginning if i'll have to go through that part and past that point, why would I read on? .....

 

15 years ago  #333
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Eating tits?....::looks around::...If it's not from a chicken......

15 years ago  #334
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Breeze I promise it was from tha tear gas grenades... rofl

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15 years ago  #335
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Originally posted by JoeyMerlino Breeze I promise it was from tha ter gas grenades... rofl

 

..Lmao..Uh huh..I'm reading yours now..Lol..

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Originally posted by JoeyMerlino But i wasnt crying...they fuckin tear gassed us! rofl

 

Thank you for giving us your story too Joey....and yea...that tear gas will get you....::looks around::.

15 years ago  #337
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Originally posted by headhunter11b  

 

Originally posted by Breezy
Originally posted by headhunter11b TXTBLK. don't even feel like reading all that stuff, sorry. I'll have to pass.
 

=( awe man i really thought alot into that story too...hmm guess ill re think a new one and make it shorter

 

 

You don't have to..Lol..I'ma read it...

lol ok thxx ladies, sry when i get to writing/typing creativly i cnt stop lol even tho the sorty isnt properly read, i was majoring in english literature, well online course anywho...yah lol i like to wite end of story

 

 

I would give it a try, seriously, if it wasnt all crammed together in one huge block. call me old fashioned, but if it's gotta be that long, at least air it out, and divide in paragraphs, you know what I mean, just a bit of constructive criticism on my part.

15 years ago  #338
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Originally posted by Breezy
Originally posted by JoeyMerlino But i wasnt crying...they fuckin tear gassed us! rofl

 

Thank you for giving us your story too Joey....and yea...that tear gas will get you....::looks around::.

 

thank ya girl 316 for callin me out...lol

 

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15 years ago  #339
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I don't even see the original post for headhunter11b...So..I'm assuming he deleted it?..and..if that's the case....I'm not reading it...Especially not from someones quote..lol..

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15 years ago  #340
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Originally posted by JoeyMerlino  

 

Originally posted by Breezy
Originally posted by JoeyMerlino But i wasnt crying...they fuckin tear gassed us! rofl
 

Thank you for giving us your story too Joey....and yea...that tear gas will get you....::looks around::.

 

 

thank ya girl 316 for callin me out...lol

 

 

hey no problem, sorry I didnt get back to ya before Joey... glad to know you can be gangsta without Whispario, but blood is thicker, we both know that. You guys keep watchin each other's backs like you do.

 

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